This seems unclear: "before the heat has sunken in and made everything hard." Did you mean difficult? I appreciate your vivid images - and I have some thoughts about making your writing stronger. I am a writer and writing mentor, lived on Yucca Mesa for a year and wrote my novel, "29" while I was there. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/18528074-29
This seems unclear: "before the heat has sunken in and made everything hard." Did you mean difficult? I appreciate your vivid images - and I have some thoughts about making your writing stronger. I am a writer and writing mentor, lived on Yucca Mesa for a year and wrote my novel, "29" while I was there. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/18528074-29
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Love this friend. Thank you so much for the share 🤍🤍🤍
This: "They are those whose souls are warm to the touch, having basked in the glow of the desert sun just long enough to soak up some of its magic."